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Sce 2183.

Treasury.

5/3.

/Mclosure.

P/3-

Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M.

Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856.

Received.

Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the Treasury.

El Y MY Ulff

441 Gil

W. 14.

2183

2180

JH Hary

intered

MINUTE/4

1800

22 Jade's 14

prioriente 14 TRIBAL

Pastabackers 15 reto 17

29 Maret 46

£7

18th Maret 156

Sam dirited by Mer

Le time sluichere to

Kuntoil to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of

two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong

relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial

13. 10 Jan

16.16

68

However, to follow the exact output format requested (HTML using

for paragraphs), the above response is already in the correct format. To improve it further according to the given rules: 1. **Format** — The text is already transformed into HTML format using

tags. 2. **Reasonable adding of words and re-ordering**: Some minor adjustments can be made for clarity. 3. **Correct spelling errors** — Corrections made: "soongrong" to "Hongkong", "briental" to "Oriental", "Seve" to "sum", "Cloril" to "Colonial", "Gorerna" to "Governor", "Horry Kovy" to "Hong Kong". 4. **Fix spacing issues** — Extra spaces removed. 5. **Rejoin broken sentences** — Sentences rejoined where necessary. 6. **Restore paragraph breaks** — Paragraph breaks restored. 7. **Indicate missing words** — Not applicable here as the corrections were made based on context. 8. **Do not rephrase or rewrite** — The original tone and style are maintained as much as possible. 9. **Format in markdown then convert to HTML** — Initially formatted directly in HTML as per the output requirement. 10. **No translation of text** — Not applicable. 11. **Format of File Reference** — Not directly applicable but file references are kept as is. 12. **Page numbering** — Not explicitly present in the given text but would be kept if present. The final output remains the same as the initial response because it already adheres to the required HTML format and incorporates necessary corrections.

Sce 2183.

Treasury.

5/3.

/Mclosure.

P/3-

Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M.

Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856.

Received.

Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the Treasury.

...

...

To Kuntoil (or more likely "To you") for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial

13. 10 Jan

16.16

68

Revised to:

Sce 2183.

Treasury.

5/3.

/Mclosure.

P/3-

Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M.

Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856.

Received.

Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation. Submitting proposal from the Treasury.

El Y MY Ulff

441 Gil

W. 14.

2183

2180

JH Hary

intered

MINUTE/4

1800

22 Jade's 14

prioriente 14 TRIBAL

Pastabackers 15 reto 17

29 Maret 46

£7

18th Maret 156

Sam dirited by Mer

Le time sluichere to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial

13. 10 Jan

16.16

68

However, upon closer inspection, a more accurate representation following the rules and maintaining the original content as much as possible is provided directly in the initial response. The adjustments made were minimal and aimed at enhancing clarity while adhering to the instructions.

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Sce 2183. Treasury. 5/3. /Mclosure. P/3- Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M. Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856. Received. Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the Treasury. El Y MY Ulff 441 Gil W. 14. 2183 2180 JH Hary intered MINUTE/4 1800 22 Jade's 14 prioriente 14 TRIBAL Pastabackers 15 reto 17 29 Maret 46 £7 18th Maret 156 Sam dirited by Mer Le time sluichere to Kuntoil to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial 13. 10 Jan 16.16 68 However, to follow the exact output format requested (HTML using for paragraphs), the above response is already in the correct format. To improve it further according to the given rules: 1. **Format** The text is already transformed into HTML format using tags. 2. **Reasonable adding of words and re-ordering**: Some minor adjustments can be made for clarity. 3. **Correct spelling errors** Corrections made: "soongrong" to "Hongkong", "briental" to "Oriental", "Seve" to "sum", "Cloril" to "Colonial", "Gorerna" to "Governor", "Horry Kovy" to "Hong Kong". 4. **Fix spacing issues** Extra spaces removed. 5. **Rejoin broken sentences** Sentences rejoined where necessary. 6. **Restore paragraph breaks** Paragraph breaks restored. 7. **Indicate missing words** Not applicable here as the corrections were made based on context. 8. **Do not rephrase or rewrite** The original tone and style are maintained as much as possible. 9. **Format in markdown then convert to HTML** Initially formatted directly in HTML as per the output requirement. 10. **No translation of text** Not applicable. 11. **Format of File Reference** Not directly applicable but file references are kept as is. 12. **Page numbering** Not explicitly present in the given text but would be kept if present. The final output remains the same as the initial response because it already adheres to the required HTML format and incorporates necessary corrections. Sce 2183. Treasury. 5/3. /Mclosure. P/3- Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M. Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856. Received. Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the Treasury. ... ... To Kuntoil (or more likely "To you") for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial 13. 10 Jan 16.16 68 Revised to: Sce 2183. Treasury. 5/3. /Mclosure. P/3- Governor Sir John Bowring to Secretary Grey, B. LL.M. Victoria, Hongkong, 10th January, 1856. Received. Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Hongkong to remain in Oriental Bank Corporation. Submitting proposal from the Treasury. El Y MY Ulff 441 Gil W. 14. 2183 2180 JH Hary intered MINUTE/4 1800 22 Jade's 14 prioriente 14 TRIBAL Pastabackers 15 reto 17 29 Maret 46 £7 18th Maret 156 Sam dirited by Mer Le time sluichere to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Treasury copies of two dispatches from the Governor of Hong Kong relative to the deposit of the sum of £15,000 with the Oriental Bank & the Credit of the Colonial 13. 10 Jan 16.16 68 However, upon closer inspection, a more accurate representation following the rules and maintaining the original content as much as possible is provided directly in the initial response. The adjustments made were minimal and aimed at enhancing clarity while adhering to the instructions.
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Sce 2183. Treasury. 5/3. /Mclosure. P/3- Governor Sir John Bowring Setge Grey, B. LL.M. Vicious, soongrong, 10th January, 1856- Received. Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Dongkong to receive in briental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the Treasury. El Y MY Ulff 441 Gil W. 14. 2183 2180 JH Hary intered MINUTE/4 1800 22 Jade's 14 prioriente 14 TRIBAL Pastabackers 15 reto 17 29 Maret46 £7 18th Maret 156 Sam dirited by Mer Le time sluichere to Kuntoil to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of the Ressung copies of tws dispatches from the Gorerna of Horry Kovy relative to the deposit of the Seve of £15.000 with the Criental Bank & the Credit of the Cloril 13. 10 Jan 16.16 68
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Sce 2183.

Treasury.

5/3.

/Mclosure.

P/3-

Governor Sir John Bowring Setge Grey, B. LL.M.

Vicious, soongrong, 10th January, 1856-

Received.

Balances in the Colonial deposit the unappropriated at Dongkong to receive in

briental Bank Corporation Submitting proposal from the

Treasury.

El Y MY Ulff

441 Gil

W. 14.

2183

2180

JH Hary

intered

MINUTE/4

1800

22 Jade's 14

prioriente 14 TRIBAL

Pastabackers 15 reto 17

29 Maret46

£7

18th Maret 156

Sam dirited by Mer

Le time sluichere to

Kuntoil to you for the Consideration of the Lords Commissioners of

the Ressung copies of

tws dispatches from

the Gorerna of Horry

Kovy

relative to the

deposit of the Seve

of £15.000 with the

Criental Bank & the

Credit of the Cloril

13. 10 Jan

16.16

68

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